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Don’t Tell Them They’re Secondary Characters, or, The Many Untold Stories in a Book

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A story is like a diamond. Depending on which way you hold it up to the light, you can see into a whole different facet of that story world. Each character has his own perspective on the fictive world that he inhabits, but as writers, it’s our job to keep the focus on the main narrative – in this case, the romance.

At least that is how it normally works. 

But since we don’t have to be normal in The Ballroom, I thought it would be fun to look into the other facets of a romance novel, the stories NOT told. To that end, I have invited some of the secondary characters, bit parts, and walk-on players from one of my past novels to stop in for a visit to try to make the case for why their stories should be told.

But first–before I summon these visitors into the Ballroom, I must remind our glitterati, as exquisitely well-mannered as you all are, please, for gentility’s sake, do not mention their true status to our visitors, if you please.

None of them has the slightest idea that they are secondary characters. I can assure you, they view themselves as the undisputed stars of their own lives, as do we all. And so it must be. Even the liveried footman has a mind and a soul beneath that powdered wig…      

Liveried Footman: This dashed wig is so itchy. I wish she’d call us in and get this over with. It’s not easy standing here like a statue when I already have to pee.

Gaelen: Oh, guests? Get the door, please, footman. I’d like to present our first visitor… Come in…that’s right, make yourselves at home. No, Mara and Jordan aren’t here. Today is all about YOU…

[By the way, I decided to focus on a few of the secondary characters from my 2011 release, My Irresistible Earl, because it's part of Avon's big April E-Book Sale on selected "Earl" themed titles all month long. The full listing of Earls for Girls can be found at http://www.avonromance.com/2012/04/09/april-early-bird-specials/. Throughout the month of April, these selected titles are only $1.99!]

My Irresistible Earl by Gaelen Foley book cover

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Gaelen (as they shuffle in): Well then, let’s get started! Please tell us a little about yourself and what genre you feel are best suited for. 

1. Mrs. Busby – Literary Fiction.

 ”No rest for the weary… Ah, but you’ll never hear me complaining. I know how lucky to have such a fine position in these hard times. Lady Pierson is an easy mistress to work for. Pay no mind to the rumors about her ‘scandalous’ behavior. It’s all lies! Bless ‘er, she’s had a hard time with her husband dyin’ young like that, and of course, little Thomas is a dear. Still, it troubles me sometimes thinking of how lookin’ after Her Ladyship’s boy when I’ve got thirty grandchildren of my own scattered round. I’m 65 years old and I should hope when Thomas is old enough for a governess, I may be able to retire and help my daughters look after their wee ones instead.”

Gaelen: Thank you, Mrs. Busby. I think in the handsof the right author, yours could be a fascinating story and certainly pertinent today. Many grandmothers these days face a similar situation to yours, whether it’s having to work a fulltime job longer than expected or finding themselves the primary source of childcare that their grown children rely on to take care of their kids.  

Mara's mystery-solving cat scanning a letter for clues...

2. The Cat.- Mystery. We all know cats solve mysteries on a regular basis these days. Mara’s cat doesn’t solve mysteries and doesn’t actually havemuch of a stream of consciousness. It spends most of its days trying to escape the toddler in the house, Thomas, Mrs. Busby’s charge. But if the cat were a feline sleuth, perhaps it could have helped with the next Secondary Character to come sidling in from a shadowy corner of the Ballroom, his favorite silver flashing in his grip. 

3. Dresden Bloodwell. – Serial Killer/Suspense Novel. - “Get it straight. I don’t answer to you, and I don’t expect that someone like you could ever begin to understand me. I will respond to your questions only because it amuses me. But if you were to cross my path in a darkened alley some night, don’t be surprised if you don’t make it home. 
          Why did I choose the name Dresden Bloodwell when I re-created myself with my new identity, you ask? No, you’re quite right, it isn’t the name I was born with. That blind fool is dead and gone. I chose Dresden because it was the city where I killed for the first time, and Bloodwell… I just like the sound. It helps inspire fear in others, and that’s what the Prometheans pay me to do.” 

Gaelen: Egads! I marvel that there are authors out there who, despite being very nice people, love writing about creepsters like you, Mr. Bloodwell. They must really love writing about their fictional detectives–maybe that makes up for having to spend months on end working on a novel with a sinister villain like that. 
          But as a strange, chilly breeze moves through the Ballroom, raising the hairs on the back of our necks, I realize things are about to get even creepier…   

4. Ghost of the Heroine’s Dead Husband. – Paranormal. – “Mara… Mara…”

Gaelen: Oh, look! The curtains are billowing. Do you hear that?

Ghost of Viscount Pierson: “Mine…”

Gaelen: Pardon? Could you speak up please? (A vase goes crashing off the mantel.) That wasn’t nice! What do you think you’re doing, Lord Pierson?

Ghost: Mine… She belongs to me…

Gaelen: No, my lord, I’m afraid you have been dead for two years. It’s time for Mara to move on. She’s got another chance to get back together with her first love–her true love–the one she met before you ever came along. Now, shoo! 

Cat (eyeing Albert): Meow.

<Squawk!>

Gaelen: Indeed, Albert. We definitely need to lighten things up a bit after that! I know just whom to call in–Mara’s glamorous but thoroughly cynical best friend…

5. Delilah – Chick Lit. – (Dressed to the nines, she swirls Champagne in a crystal flute.) “Ah, so many men, so little time! Agreed, ladies? I admit, I love a handsome face almost as much as good day’s shopping. Of course, you won’t find me falling into such a state over any man as Mara has over Falconridge.
       What’s that? Am I jealous?
       Fustian! I’m thrilled to see her happy, naturally. It’s just, she used to be so much more fun when she was single like me. (Sigh) There is no happier state than to be a wealthy widow in Town who is still possessed of beauty, youth, and fortune. But I suppose it doesn’t matter. It only leaves more available gentlemen for me.”   

So, you see, one set of characters could result in an untold number of different stories. It all depends simply on which character’s eyes we are viewing the story world through.

Authors have had phenomenal success in recent years taking a secondary character from classic fiction or history and telling their stories. (The Other Boleyn Girl, Mr. & Mrs. Darcy mysteries, Wicked, Rhett Butler’s People, etc.)

Which secondary character inspired a spin-off story that you enjoyed, OR, which secondary character that you’ve read deserves his/her own story?  

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  1. Apr 12, 2012
    2:51 am
    Gwendollyn Ray

    Fun post :D I’ve been busy and haven’t replied lately, but I still enjoy reading all of them!

    Most of the authors I follow do great follow up novels of their secondary characters, but I REALLY want Lisa Kleypas to write a story for Bennett and Audrey from her book ‘Love in the Afternoon’. They would have a great story.

    Good thing there’s so many good authors coming out with exciting new characters all the time :p There’s never a long drought.

    • Gaelen Foley
      Apr 12, 2012
      10:54 am

      Hi Gwendollyn! Nice to see you back again. I’m a Lisa Kleypas fan, too.

      So many great secondary characters, so little time!

      Gaelen :)

    • Sabrina Darby
      Apr 12, 2012
      8:00 pm

      Oh I agree, Gwendollyn! Btw, I just put two and two together that Kleypas must have put the name Audrey in as a nod to Audrey Hepburn who was in the Love in the Afternoon movie.


      • Apr 12, 2012
        10:20 pm
        Gwendollyn Ray

        o.O You are soooo right! I’ve never realized that myself. *hate when that happens* :p Pretty good movie as well.


  2. Apr 12, 2012
    3:40 am
    Beebs

    Could I nominate Fort and Rush from One Night of Sin. I’d love to see those to rakehells get the HEA that they don’t know they’re looking for. :)


    • Apr 12, 2012
      3:41 am
      Beebs

      *two* headslap!

      More coffee needed, clearly. :)

    • Gaelen Foley
      Apr 12, 2012
      10:49 am

      Beebs, you are so right! And thanks for the shout-out to Alec Knight’s drinking buddies. *g* They’d make good heroes, you’re right.
      :)
      Gaelen

    • Katharine Ashe
      Apr 12, 2012
      7:27 pm

      Hear hear!

    • Sabrina Darby
      Apr 12, 2012
      8:02 pm

      This post is making me want to read all these stories!!! Watch out, Gaelen…you just might have assigned yourself some more work.


  3. Apr 12, 2012
    7:37 am
    Jamie Beck

    In Lisa Kleypas books, my fave secondary character that got a story is Marcus, Lord Westcliff, followed by Sebastian, Lord St. Vincent in It Happened One Autumn and Devil in Winter. I loved reading about Marcus in the books coming up and after his books. I just adore him.

    In Tessa Dare’s books, I can’t wait to read the story of Kate Taylor and Corporal Thorne. From the moment that they saw each other for the first time, I saw instant chemistry. I was afraid they would be brother and sister, which would destroy a love story between them. I really like Minerva and Colin’s story. Both Minerva’s, if you think about it.

    In general — I LOVE it when there is a cat in the story and I always love secondary characters. Dresden Bloodwell is a WONDERFUL bad guy. You always need a good bad guy in my opinion.


    • Apr 12, 2012
      7:42 am
      Lisa

      Jamie, YES! YES! YES! I absolutely can’t wait for A Lady By Midnight! :) I am so looking forward to Kate and Thorne’s story and already have 8/28 marked off with a big circle on my calendar. :)

    • Gaelen Foley
      Apr 12, 2012
      10:51 am

      Thanks, Jamie! Good choices. Glad you liked Evil Dresden! lol. You know, some readers actually wrote to me earlier on in the series and asked if he would be redeemed and become a hero. He had a quality… But he turned out to be a psycho. Not that that usually stops me when I’m designing my heroes (Drake).
      :P
      Gaelen


  4. Apr 12, 2012
    7:40 am
    Lisa

    Fun post Gaelen! :) I love sefun seconday characters in romances, especially when they leap off the page and are compelling enough for us to want to know more about them and for them to get their own story.

    I am hoping Lady Charlotte Brandon from Maya Rodale’s Writing Girls series gets a story someday. She is such a fun great character and a total scene stealer, especially in A Groom of One’s Own and The Tattooed Duke.

    I was thrilled when Julie James wrote a book for Kyle Rhodes, the brother of the heroine of her previous book, A Lot Like Love. After ALLL, you definitely wanted to know more about “The Twitter Terrorist” lol. About That Night is fantastic, and I absolutely adored the book. :)

    Eloisa James created such a great larger than life character in the Duke of Villiers in her Desperate Duchesses series. I remember Eloisa saying she originally wasn’t planning to tell his story, but as the series progressed and his role grew, she just knew she HAD to write a book for him, and I for one am so glad she did!

    I am one of the legions of fans who would like Lisa Kleypas to revisit her first contemporary trilogy and write a book for Joe, the last Travis brother!

    • Katharine Ashe
      Apr 12, 2012
      7:30 pm

      Lisa, I happen to know that Maya is planning a story for Charlotte YAY!


      • Apr 12, 2012
        9:18 pm
        Lisa

        Oh that’s fantastic! :) I know she was thinking about/planning a story but didn’t know it was official. Yes! So excited.


  5. Apr 12, 2012
    10:42 am

    Hi Gaelen and greetings to all our guests, you’re all wonderful characters and Albert, stay high and away from THE CAT. I love this post, such fun. I hope someone will relieve the poor Footman so he might relieve himself. Everyone needs a break occasionally. *wink*

    Well, I was going to say Lady Charlotte Brandon but Lisa already beat me to it. I just finished Maya Rodale’s THE TATTOOED DUKE (which I’m reviewing tomorrow) and Charlotte just cracks me up. She definitely needs her own excursion into the world of romance despite her brother’s best efforts to keep her out of trouble.

    One of the things I love about reading your books, Gaelen, is that you get a real sense that everyone is truly important to each story and grow along with the main characters to eventually get their own story told. Thank you for that. I like it when a character who is a great support to the main characters (notice I didn’t use that other word) is strong enough to make us fall a bit in love with them, too. Happy Thursday everyone! I’m off to my usual Thursday from h. e. double toothpicks! LOL!

    • Gaelen Foley
      Apr 12, 2012
      10:53 am

      Amy, thank you very much!! And lol on the footman and the cat.

      I don’t think I’ve ever actually read a mystery with a cat sleuth. I should! I wonder how an author makes that work…

      Well, hope your day isn’t too he double toothpick-ish! We’re here to cheer you up. And I will definitely be swinging by your blog tomorrow to check out your take on Maya Rodale’s new book. Love her.

      Gaelen

  6. Gaelen Foley
    Apr 12, 2012
    12:04 pm

    BY THE WAY – My Book Trailer Video for my Children’s Novel was just finished. I’d like to invite you all to come see it while we’re hanging out.

    VIDEO for THE LOST HEIR go to: http://www.EGFoley.com
    It came out great!

    Gaelen


    • Apr 12, 2012
      4:50 pm

      Love this video, Gael! I can’t wait for this book! xoxox

      • Miranda Neville
        Apr 12, 2012
        5:18 pm

        Seconded. The video is BRILLIANT

        • Gaelen Foley
          Apr 12, 2012
          6:31 pm

          Thanks, guys! I’m really happy with how it came out. That was from Book Candy Studios. They do wonderful work. Thanks for checking it out!
          :)
          Gaelen

    • Katharine Ashe
      Apr 12, 2012
      7:30 pm

      Love it, Gaelen!

    • Sabrina Darby
      Apr 12, 2012
      8:06 pm

      Very nice!


    • Apr 12, 2012
      9:32 pm

      Wow, Gaelen, the video is awesome. I’m going to send it to my nieces. I know they would love this series. : )

      Btw, hope you do come by the blog tomorrow for the review of Maya’s THE TATTOOED DUKE … it was such a delightful read and I had fun reviewing it!
      Everyone is invited to stop by and don’t be shy about saying hello. : )

    • Kate Noble
      Apr 13, 2012
      2:21 am

      Love the video!

  7. Miranda Neville
    Apr 12, 2012
    5:15 pm

    Fab post as always, Gaelen. A well written secondary character always cries out for a story of his/her own (unless he’s dead, of course). Of those on offer I pick Delilah. I’m a patsy for a party girl.

    • Sabrina Darby
      Apr 12, 2012
      8:07 pm

      Me too!! That’s who I want to read more about.


  8. Apr 12, 2012
    5:49 pm

    Thank you for your post, Gaelen. Which secondary characters would I like to see in their own stories? Quite a few. But in historical romances, they all tend to have one thing in common. Their social standing. Or should I say, their lack thereof.

    I hope I don’t get kicked out of the ballroom for saying this, but I would dearly love to read more historical romances that focus on servants, peasants, middle-class people, soldiers, minor officials, outcasts, and other social nobodies. Surely they too must have fallen in love and experienced complications in their personals lives that would make for compelling fiction. For this reader, anyhow.

    True, non-aristocratic characters can serve and have appeared as protagonists in literary and mainstream fiction. But what about romance fiction? That’s where the challenge lies. If only some envelope-pushing authors and editors would take it up!

    Or maybe . . . I should just write my own.

    Keep up the good work!

    • Gaelen Foley
      Apr 12, 2012
      6:36 pm

      Hi Mary Anne, you make a good point. I’ve seen a number of romances now and then over the years with non-aristocrat main characters, especially the gentry class (like Jane Austen’s heroines) but you’re right, you don’t see it much. For me, non-aristocrat people definitely make good secondary characters, but to the extent that they are scrabbling to survive against realistic pressures, it can take away from the fantasy feeling that readers love in romance to just sweep them away. At least that’s my general take on it. Was it Kleypas who had a rat-catcher for a heroine in one book?? It was a few years ago.. or was that Theresa Medeiros? I’m drawing a blank…
      Thanks for your comment.
      :)
      G.


      • Apr 12, 2012
        6:56 pm

        You’re welcome, Gaelen.

        True, the typical historical romance reader demands, as you put it, ” . . . the fantasy feeling that readers love in romance to just sweep them away.” But not this reader.

        What I look for in romance fiction is a story about the power, beauty, and wonder of love. And it’s at its most powerful, beautiful, and wondrous when it must endure hardships, brave dangers, overcome obstacles, break the rules, and beat the odds.

        The lives of non-aristocratic characters present countless situations and events that lend themselves to this approach toward romance. And they haven’t already been written about over and over.

        The romance genre is large and getting larger. There should be room in it for stories to fit every reader’s tastes.

      • Katharine Ashe
        Apr 12, 2012
        7:35 pm

        Mary Anne, the hero of my next book, HOW TO BE A PROPER LADY, is not an aristocrat. He is a man of great wealth, it’s true, but gained through his own hard work (including lucrative crime) over many years.


        • Apr 12, 2012
          8:17 pm

          Thanks for the tip, Katharine. Do you or anyone else know about other examples?

  9. Katharine Ashe
    Apr 12, 2012
    7:39 pm

    Gaelen, this post is hilarious. I love it especially since my new series — the Falcon Club — all started because the secondary characters in my CAPTURED BY A ROGUE LORD wanted their own stories. And so I gave them stories. :)

    • Gaelen Foley
      Apr 13, 2012
      11:51 am

      Cool! Glad you enjoyed, and I’m always happy to hear about the inception of my writer friends’ books. Fun!

  10. Kate Noble
    Apr 13, 2012
    2:22 am

    Oh secondary character story… I do believe Miss MacLean should hurry up and give us Benedict’s story (the brother from Nine Rules)…


    • Apr 13, 2012
      2:27 am
      Gwendollyn Ray

      Agreed!


    • Apr 13, 2012
      9:47 am
      Lisa

      I third that notion!


  11. Apr 13, 2012
    1:49 pm
    Clarissa

    I think two secondary characters from one of the first historical romances I’ve ever read deserve their own books! Cat and Raven from Laura London’s “Windflower”. I would worry though that the heroine’s wouldn’t be worth of them! :)

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